Suggestions for storybord

Just to give a small update after my presentation, all seemed to have gone well with any questions being answered in the storyboards. Questions included information being stated by the narrator so i just had to clarify what the narrator would be saying to fill in the gaps! the weakness in the story which i had already known was an issue and for this reason left it to see what the panel could suggest. This was that some tutors wanted to see the witch doing spells and each time getting prettier. Some thought it was better off without and the decision in the end was mine. Since this would not make the story much longer i decided that after the storyboards go to outside with the the zaps through the window of the witch casting spells, i would shoot back into the castle showing the witch getting prettier! this will happen 3 times and at this stage my film will change from day to night.

This means that my story will follow the traditional layout with

1) a set up
2) 3 things that go wrong
3) a solution or a resolution!

With this i feel that my story now has a more richer middle! and thus showing the viewers also where the spells have been going wrong!

I have also begun investigating any scenes that i think will give me problems, and will need researching and development. The first ones i have begun thinking and researching are the pixie dust scenes, with the help of people that know fusion and particles, also the glow coming from the big book of spells. The day going to night.

These are my main focus. I will also begin looking at my assets for the film in regards to colour and design which will be over half way by the time i have to present my ideas again to the panel on the 11th of November!